Essay Response
Indians vs. Modern Society
You choose Indian Cartography and The First; the tile came up to be Indians vs. Modern Society. The essay
talked about how unfair the government was with the Indians and how the
government “tried” to make them feel better in the modern society. On this
essay the intro was great, but you missed to introduce the Poems as poems
because the readers would not know that these are poems. On your first
paragraph was upside down, and the points were not clear, you left your reader
hanging. It was upside down because the main point was at the bottom instead on
the top. But in your very last paragraph was so much better and clear which
that save you for failing the essay; the conclusion was so cool that the
teacher love it!
What I learn from this chapter was to
understand people and that everyone have bittersweet memories, also to compare
two poems and to understand them deeply with critical thinking.
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