California’s Fault
Essay Response
In this essay I talked
about what the song San Andreas Fault was trying to tell us, at the beginning
on the essay I had a good thesis statement, but some ideas in the sentences
were not clear so for consequence the leading up of the introduction did not
work too much. When the music goes on it talks about that you are going to
become a super star but at some point you are going to end up bad because is
kind of related to Hollywood cycle thin you start good, you get into the climax
and then you go down hill; so as an example I used the Governator Arnold Schwarzenegger
and the famous family The Kardashians. Although theses are really interesting
examples it doesn’t work to the fullest because the song is referring to a
female only, it do not connect to the essay. The conclusion was good, “California’s
Fault that make people keep dreaming and overachieving in this wicked land of
hope”. Overall, I think I did a better job than the previous essay, but I still
need to work on the clarification and the flow on the sentences by using PIE.
What I leaned in this
chapter was to be able to recognize the importance of the meanings in each
song, you will find more than a song. I also learn about the metaphors that the
songwriters used to communicate with their audience.
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